tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25876497.post5775447766575320648..comments2023-08-18T11:30:52.311-04:00Comments on The Mummy Chronicles: Here we go!Victoriahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03555904687591523523noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25876497.post-31499239167981889852008-02-27T08:18:00.000-05:002008-02-27T08:18:00.000-05:00H's comments- -Goes too far back into the past too...H's comments- <BR/>-Goes too far back into the past too fast. Too many characters introduced too soon. The beginning was confusing and not clear what was going on. Possibly re-write it or start it in the therapists office instead?Victoriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03555904687591523523noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25876497.post-381650769218570972008-02-26T14:15:00.000-05:002008-02-26T14:15:00.000-05:00Sounds good V - good luck on your writing and I lo...Sounds good V - good luck on your writing and I look forward to reading more each week.cdrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17505719902649657587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25876497.post-52082286518438047332008-02-26T14:00:00.000-05:002008-02-26T14:00:00.000-05:00Well it is very much a work in progress- I am on c...Well it is very much a work in progress- I am on chapter two now and haven't even attempted to have anyone look at it. It's all just swimming in my brain.Victoriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03555904687591523523noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25876497.post-90204160904341550372008-02-26T13:23:00.000-05:002008-02-26T13:23:00.000-05:00You tease, I want more. How close is this book to ...You tease, I want more. How close is this book to being done?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04910142246887752027noreply@blogger.com